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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

If you were going for a lineless sort of look, I suggest trying to blend the colors more with the pencil outline so that it's less noticeable.
The way you depicted what you were going for I think was really good, but her eyes seem a bit big compared to her head (I don't know if that's your style, but if it isn't, I suggest making the eyes a bit smaller).
Butterflies don't fly synchronized, so if the butterflies' wings differed a little bit from each other as they lew I feel it would look a bit better.
All in all, I really liked this drawing, although there were a few small things you could have fixed. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>